Below is the link to my NEATE prezi. More handouts to come (as soon as grading is finished!).
Below is the link to my NEATE prezi. More handouts to come (as soon as grading is finished!).
For the first time in quite some time, I decided to teach a unit on memoir writing. Two years after interning at Nancie Atwell’s Center for Teaching and Learning, I was finally ready to use what I had learned. I relied heavily on the information learned at CTL as well as Atwell’s book Lessons that Change Writers ,and I am very proud of how the unit turned out and the growth each student made as a writer in the process. I am very excited to share my process and some of my students’ work with you.
I spent a lot of time working with my students on choosing a meaningful topic as I often find that this is one of the hardest things for a student to do. Here are the pre-writing steps I took as well as some reflections.
After a good chunk of time, we placed their work all over the classroom for a gallery walk. As the class (me included) silently examined each other’s work, they starred the phrases they loved, left comments, and asked questions. Following this peer revision technique, the writer then finalized their choice and illustrated their point using a poster, which I later videoed.
Would love to hear your thoughts and suggestions on my work. How do you start off your memoir unit?
My 8th grade students recently finished editorials. Throughout the process, I had told them that these editorials would also serve as their first posts on our class blog. After multiple drafts and a great deal of effort, students have begun to excitedly post their work, eager for feedback. Today, I had students reflect on what they learned about their writing process from the assignment. If people still wonder whether or not their students should be blogging, I offer this comment from a student’s reflection:
“At times in my writing, I felt like giving up, but then I’d remember we were posting on our blogs and I became excited.”
The writing got hard, but she persisted. Why? She knew her voice would be heard. The power of an audience of many.
There always seems to be debate amongst educators regarding how much choice students should have in their own education. And although there has been plenty of research done by both psychologists and educators regarding how important choice to both learning and motivation – Thank you, Alfie Kohn and Daniel Pink! – there still remains doubters. I’d thought I’d share three stories that have occurred to me recently that made me once again appreciate how important choice is not only for students but also for their teachers.
What prevents us from allowing people to choose their own paths? Trust. When we tell people how to act or what to do, it is because we assume that they are not able to figure that out for themselves or that they are going to make the wrong decision. They might not choose the best workshop or pick the best book or write something of substance. They don’t know what’s best for them. Therefore, we have to do it for them.
Now, I am not someone who believes that an 8th grader should determine every aspect of their academic career. I, as a teacher, also know that I cannot control absolutely everything about my curriculum or job. But I do realize how important it is for me to have some choice in my learning process. And how much more enthusiastic I am about the process when I do. Honestly, my students are not that different.
Just Say No to Book Reports and Yes to Blogging!
I wish I could remember the name of the graduate school professor I had who facetiously made this statement about book reports – “Yes, the first thing I want to do when I finish a great book, is to make a diorama” – because that really struck a chord. Not that there’s anything wrong with dioramas per se, but like many, usually when I read a great book, I want to process it and talk about it. I do not want to make a mobile of important characters and symbols (is it bazaar that I can still picture the mobile I made in third grade but have no idea what book said mobile was on) or run to find the nearest empty shoebox. Thus, in my attempt to stop destroying reading for my students, I have tried to change up the dreaded summer reading project to hopefully! make it a bit more interesting.
In the past few years, I have asked students to write a book review of the various required readings that they have done, and although I don’t think this was a bad approach, it really only allowed me to view their writing once school had already started. This was helpful but would have been more beneficial over the summer when I try to do a lot of planning. So, in trying to work “smarter not harder,” I have dropped this activity and instead am asking my students to respond to some discussion boards via our classroom blog.
Although I firmly believe in having students create the content on the blog, for this summer blogging experience, I have asked students to respond to questions I have created, seeing as the majority of these students have not done any form of blogging before. Basically, I am using the blog as the means for threaded discussions. Below, you will find my process for creating the posts regarding our summer reading book The Book Thief. You can also check out our Summer Reading Page and feel free to add to our discussion if you have read The Book Thief!
Thoughts about Process:
My education instructors would probably be terribly disappointed to find out that some of my “best teaching moments” have not come from careful planning and thought but were merely off the cuff ideas. Case in point – finally finding something to actually get 8th graders to edit a piece of writing – ON THEIR OWN!
I view editing differently than revising and always tell my students that it is the last thing they should do before turning in a piece of work. Students write all their essays on GoogleDocs in my class, and although I do typically have them print out a paper to revise, they often will stick to the computer for editing. This doesn’t mean they do it well or even have any idea where to start. I finally came to the conclusion this year that I could not leave my students to edit on their own, even after what I believed was careful instruction, but that I needed to give them time in class to edit their writing, so I could actually watch their approach.
This year as I reviewed some tips with students regarding things they should look over and some strategies for doing so, I suggested they use the Find feature on their browser to look for common errors. Little did I know that this one spur of the moment thought – and it was just that – would have such a great effect on my students’ writing. We brainstormed things that we could put into the Find feature: we found commas to make sure we were putting them in the right places, looked for words that frequently cause fragments (if you’re familiar with Jeff Anderson’s Mechanically Inclined, they are known as AAAWWUBBIS words), and even typed in some commonly misspelled words among other things.
In about fifteen minutes, students realized that they found a good number of errors in their work, but more importantly that they found errors that they knew how to fix. They were excited to make the changes and felt accomplished at the work they put in. . At the end of the year, when I asked students to edit their papers on their own and reflect on the strategies that they used to edit their work, the majority of the class used the Find feature. Several even commented on their formal evaluations that this was something that greatly helped them as writers. It was important that they realized how quick this strategy was and how much it could improve their work. Let’s face it – 8th graders don’t exactly have long attention spans, especially for things they do not think work.
Something often so simple is easily overlooked but can be extremely powerful. This tool was helpful for my students because it was tangible and allowed them to focus on one thing at at time. I often tell them that the best writers are not those that do not make mistakes but are those that realize the mistakes they frequently made. This simple strategy allowed my students better understanding of their own writing and better grades as a result. And who can complain about that!
I have used Google Docs (now Drive) in the classroom for about six years now, and I can honestly say that it has improved my ability as an English teacher probably more than any other tech-related tool. I could list a bunch of different reasons why I think it is something that every student and teacher in the country should be using, but perhaps that will come later. Instead, I want to discuss its ability to allow me to grade better and offer more detailed and specific feedback to my students.
I did not start out by grading online even after the first couple of years of using Google Docs, mostly because it seemed a bit tedious. As an English teacher, it was frustrating to have to add in things like commas and then change the color so the student knew that I had changed his work. It was easier for me to just grade by pen. Despite this, there were times when I would provide feedback and grades online, and even when it was somewhat burdensome, I realized that the quality of my comments was much higher – largely because I could type faster than I write, write more, and not be held back by the writer’s cramp that most English teacher can identify with after grading a stack of 60 three-page papers.
My students appreciated the feedback online as well. They didn’t have to worry about figuring out my cursive/print style hand-writing, easily could identify which portion of the paper I was talking about as Google Docs highlights the section of the writing attached to the comment, and didn’t have to worry about losing the paper if they wanted to go back and see prior mistakes. Their positive response made me realize that even if it was at times tedious, the good far outweighed the bad. Plus, it became tremendously helpful for me to be able to have a record of my comments that I could look back to when writing grades and assessing future work. I didn’t have to worry about making photocopies. And when I needed to find a previous piece of writing, I didn’t have to search through the stacks of paper still waiting to be filed at the corner of my desk. Do teachers actually have time to file?? Everything was neatly arranged in folders that students had created and shared with me on Google Docs. Portfolios? Check.
As I began to solely grade papers online, I also realized that I was doing too much for my students. Fixing sentences with poor punctuation, re-writing structures to help students get them to sound right, or pointing out every single mistake did not help them – especially when for the most part, they didn’t re-write their final drafts. Now, instead of identifying every mistake, I focus on things I am going to be assessing and color-code student’s work in terms of the type of error they make. For example, spelling or mechanical mistakes are highlighted blue and sentence structure mistakes are highlighted in red. Students then must go back and figure out the type of error they made – with help if necessary – and re-write the sentence so it no longer contains a mistake. This forces them to actually think about what they did wrong and, more importantly, it puts the corrections in the hands of the person who needs to know how to fix them, and it makes my students more independent and responsible for their own learning.
I will, of course, continue to grade online, but also know that sometimes I wish I had a pen that I could add symbols like arrows or stars to what I am grading. This is why I was so excited to see that there is an app soon to be coming to the iPad that will allow you to mark-up a Google Doc with a stylus. The app is called gradeonipad and I, personally, cannot wait for the email to come through that says I can give it a try. With this app, I can’t imagine why any English teacher would continue making his/her students print out papers that they are then forced to carry home if they had the option. And even if you don’t have access to an iPad, give Google Docs and online grading a try. Trust me, it’s worth it.